NYCSPITZ - Interesting verse. From what I took away from it, it was about a villainous group of Poker players who were playing for very high stakes. I imagined different variations of the Joker, or generally ruthless henchmen, and one who was slightly more down to Earth is put in a bad spot, and he's all in with his family at risk. Decent storyline and interpretation.
Copypat - This is what I expected from you, but at the same time you are getting better at hitting topics directly. It was a good breakdown of the woes of being a commission salesman. I dug it.
My vote goes to CopyPat for an easier-going verse that I liked a little more.
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