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Old 11-07-2014, 04:48 PM   #3
Mr. J
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We’re the oddities.
Pour yourself a drink and down it.
What else is there to do?
Life’s whatever you make it.
I’m lousy at building though.
Failed arts and crafts in high school.
My teacher thought I was a little slow,
But I was just high and cool.
Sat with the cool kids and made fun of the faggots.

^^^
Enjoyed this little section right here

that whole part pretty much set an already smooth tone
but it also made me laugh as well, and after I get into the section about being lucid
I fell out of my seat, it just flowed so well, I enjoyed the part afterwards too
this translates as more of a song to me, it plays out that way so well
I feel like you should have just kept going while you could
anyway, nice drop Zen, always a pleasure reading something of yours...
even if I have to look for it -_-
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