I was glad to see you came back because writing is a great hobby to have...this one was more engaging than the last thing I read from you, if I'm remembering correctly. The slight subtleties in your ideas nudged them towards that 'object of interest' territory others might not be able to pull off. As a whole, there are still nuances you're not picking up on, moments you aren't capitalizing on. It was about censorship yet it didn't offer anything concretely theoretical; emphasis was placed on an issue, and you pondered it for a bit. As the reader, I recognized that - an unremarkable piece, but a step in the right direction.
Keep it up Story.
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