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Old 04-08-2013, 07:12 PM   #2
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Hell of a verse. Exceptional work right here. The flow was clean as spring water. Piece screamed unity. Really good stuff here. Well written. The piece was well written. You know when you know a piece is well written is when you look at the computer screen and scan the verse and some of the words start looking like script in places. Like a blurr.

To march for seeds sprouted of dew harboured in breeze.
Seek through flesh carved, renewed harvest an leaves,

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