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Old 10-24-2014, 03:58 PM   #3
Mr. J
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I see...the koi fish are colorful creatures...in which case I focus on time
a colorful view on the flow of time but not deeper than that
it parallels an odd idea and the shortness of the verse is me strapped for time
I usually have under an hour to do.something this was due.to me not having a league topic

and the blending of all that paints a wonderful picture in my mind
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