[Xces]

Enigma - I feel this piece was pretty damn good but the flow simply isn't there a few of these blocks of text it wasn't until the final stanza that you really brought out that multi game that you're good at, and it drew from the piece.

I feel that if you had found a way to incorporate the spaced out stanzas together into a single block of text it would have flowed and come across a lot cleaner. It's sad to say that to me because you said, and it is evident, in the piece. The amount of research went into writing it.

I feel like your take on the topic is super original, but I don't like the execution as much as I usually do your writing.

Adonis -

The first stanza is very choppy but the rest of the piece pulls itself together and paints a very well done story through the personification of a meteor/comet in orbit before colliding with the world.

I think this take on the topic is amazing. I would not have thought of it. - Your scheme drops off in a few places but I feel overall you were more technically sound in execution then Enigma on this one.

V/Adonis