[kannon]

copypat. interesting. I was kinda hoping you would break away from just talking about texting, but it's all good. Definitely some dope lines in there. A couple lines that were worded strangely though, "ketamine and plus E," for example, and I'm always critical of just adding a "bruh" to make your multi work. But this was pretty cool. Kinda feels like the type of piece that could have been fully written in 20 minutes though, you know? No real complexities to the writing, and a little redundant in places, but still the flow was solid and the mechanics were sound.

vulgar. "skin a dog of its bones." of its bones? maybe, skin a dog to its bones. Or strip a dog of its bones. Sorry, getting finicky already. Wait, can our roots be more animalistic AND calmer? "skinned aardvark?" Man, you use some weird phrases. This is an interesting piece though. Definitely has some solid lines. But there are a lot of lines that had me confused. I enjoyed the comparison of our animalistic nature in war being presented as literal dogs, but even then, the ziplocked sauces? Some lines were just weird as shit to me. Their bark will harm you? I feel like this was a cool concept that was maybe hastily executed. And maybe I'm being overly critical, but some of those lines just didn't fly with me.

I gotta roll with Copypat. Both verses seemed rushed, but I was definitely able to enjoy copypat's more.