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Fun verse, easy reading, hilarious in parts - lmao @ crying himself to sleep after jerking it. You're great at this humorous style of writing - certainly I would be looking to you as an example if I were to attempt a humorous verse. Your rhyme schemes are very good, too. I do agree with Certain that an equally well written verse that explored the two different lifestyles in a more impartial way - considering the pros and the cons of each - may have trumped you. But maybe not. Hard to imagine how you'd incorporate that with such a humorous take as you did. Anyway, it was a great verse. Fun to read.