Netcees - View Single Post - Week 1: Innovator vs. Dove Dozer [Dove Dozer wins, 8-4.]

Pent uP · 10-06-2014, 01:32 AM

Inno - verse felt muddled and forced. Lots of issues with wording. The concept was cool I guess but the feeling of a city based off music didnt spring to life for me. Therr was some strong imagery to begin with but it fell flat by the end.

Dove -- strong opener kind of thing going in....some forced/cliche motifs. Pretty decent display of lyricism and focus for what it is. Overall if lacks substance but excels in mechanics

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10-06-2014, 01:32 AM	#14
Pent uP Robin Williams of Fallen Victims Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 1,499 Battle Record: 25-11 Accomplishments - NC Hall of Fame Champed - Netcees Writers League (2x) - NWL Season 1 - Write Night I - Art of Writing League (2x) - Write Week IV Rep Power: 6862275	Inno - verse felt muddled and forced. Lots of issues with wording. The concept was cool I guess but the feeling of a city based off music didnt spring to life for me. Therr was some strong imagery to begin with but it fell flat by the end. Dove -- strong opener kind of thing going in....some forced/cliche motifs. Pretty decent display of lyricism and focus for what it is. Overall if lacks substance but excels in mechanics Vote inno Last edited by Pent uP; 10-06-2014 at 01:35 AM.