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Originally Posted by El Pancake
I don't know what Wack MC is. Is this a parody of bad writing? Because if so you did really well, because this was objectively terrible. All of your rhymes were basic and you often added an unnecessary word after a comma just to make them work (, see). The content was childish and base, without being aware or satirical. It was like reading a 5th grade boy writing potty humor, with worse rhymes. Just being honest. Read some of the 'respected' writers here and try harder to do better. Honest feed.
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thank you!!!!! That was perfect feedback!
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Bags --- you take yourself way too seriously, bro. If you lost 25% of your ego you'd be 200 times better.