Eng - I know you're very particular about what goes where in your verses, so this seemed like an intricate treatise on a mountain climber's motivation to live. It ranged from outgoing to cynical for me, and at times was a little to ubiquitous to take anything firmly rooted away from it.
Pandake - No doubts you tried to be crafty with this one. It was kind of mustard-y. What I mean by that is it was bitter where it could've been sweet, minor league tasty, shuffling without giving up a card. I thought it was okay.
I liked Eng's more. Good spar.
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