Vinzr - I see your strengths in moment-to-moment writing. You transition from thought to thought is impeccable. Your thought process is keen but your lyrics aren't the sharpest. Last paragraph was dilating though, Good shit.
Que - Great verse. You were on some kevin sorbo shit. the ... and the !!! were strong here. Barbaric bars man. I raise my goblet to you. Last lines of both verses were heavy.
To die for happiness is an honor....to kill for enlightenment is an order
To spread elation is our mantra.....we fight for the Gods of Morgah! - Que
My vote goes to Que; one of my favorite reads this season. Welcome to the AOWL - My friend. Feast with the lions.
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