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Originally Posted by Camp Bell
I liked this, i thought the references were cool
of course the rhyming was dope, in my opinion
tho, couldve been more complex, experiment
sometimes bro, make line 1 and 2 rhyme with
line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type
shit. keep working. alpha out. lmaooooooooo
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Lol word son that's what I been doing... Experimenting w/ different flows and structures, also believe it or not but when I'll get some bullshit feed from the haters pointing out all my flaws I actually have been taking their criticism and applying it