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Camp Bell · 09-03-2014, 09:50 PM

I liked this, i thought the references were cool
of course the rhyming was dope, in my opinion
tho, couldve been more complex, experiment
sometimes bro, make line 1 and 2 rhyme with
line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type
shit. keep working. alpha out. lmaooooooooo

09-03-2014, 09:50 PM	#2
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	I liked this, i thought the references were cool of course the rhyming was dope, in my opinion tho, couldve been more complex, experiment sometimes bro, make line 1 and 2 rhyme with line 5 and 6, 3 and 4 rhyme with 7 and 8 type shit. keep working. alpha out. lmaooooooooo __________________ get high. write rhymes.