KnowP: Your punchline begs the punch. That wording was so drawn out it got to be tedious, and the setup was clumsy. But mostly, the line didn't connect. It wasn't harsh or funny or clever, really. It was bland.
Meth: Your punchline begs the puncher. Also, the "mayonnaise sandwiches and sides of bologna" part of your setup was clumsy. But what you had that KnowP didn't was a pretty clever punchline.
Both of you need to quit calling the kettle black.
Vote: Meth
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