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Old 08-30-2014, 02:34 AM   #4
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hmm...Good shit bro. I miss your stories. Like that dinner of death; the round table. Youve produced some really dope verses, all of which have been short. I wish you would focus more on a single verse, just fleshing that shit out and making it epic, yet keeping your signature free flowing, "key style esque" flow. This was a decent track with a few good bars, which was needed considering the length. But there were a few lines that simply weren't as good. Keep, doing you Old Timer
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