does this really belong in the open mic section gamble?
Lol jk kinda
it's hard to not be impressed by campbell's lines there lol. wow.
certain's & jason todd's in particular flow very nicely.
they actually all flow well except 1.
gamble i know you're better than this i've seen it. impressive # of rhymes but IMO often have to change cadence a bit in order to fit them.
but i am one to talk, i usually have the same exact problem an order of magnitude worser.
Plot's 1st half of the verse was dope but got a bit weaker at the end. i think it was an 'effort' issue and not anything that feedback could help.
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