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Old 08-29-2014, 06:26 PM   #7
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This was a good read from both parts.
I was fond of Blanc's direction, and I felt he illustrated it very well. I for one don't think he took the cliche path interpreting the topic, although it might seem a bit more predictable. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it.
Still, Darth Yoda verse was definitely written with more vitality. Everything about it was admirable. The language was eloquent, and the rhyming was superb. Although I for one liked Blanc's topic directionality I still have to give it to Darth Yoda due to superior craftsmanship, in this case.

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Thank you both.
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