MKG, I liked the direction you went with your concept, but the np/wp itself was too vague. Instead of going with the USC approach maybe you could have played off his name or the situation itself. I have no problem with you linking for context, I just thought when you said look dumber than him lying ab why you fell off, you used the USC np/wp to connect it and the USC connection was very generalized.
I liked Certain's MKG reference and np. It was a rocky delivery tho. I thought MKG did a much better job with his delivery and building up his concept. And idk if dyslex'd is a word lol.
v-Certain
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