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Old 08-27-2014, 06:54 PM   #16
Vulgar
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I was trying to read this without imagining you as the narrator because your sarcasm sometimes chars a piece's seriousness. I was waiting for a joke but you may feel very passionately about your indifference to following politics, so I might be at fault here. I thought it was cool, the structure was unique for a change in the OM and the rhyming was sharp. The subject matter was truthful in some cases.
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