Yo pharo, this should be lengthened, very vivid content in this brief piece,
Honestly it was a considerable amount descriptive illustrates which was how i met the characters, creative concepts, not very flowy, but in respect you are a writer not a rapper keep up the work, ill be lookin for similar pieces from you, although i stated above it should be lengthened, it was brief but the story was told, i just thought it ended to soon/quick,.
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