Wickerman line was dope, I love that movie. (The original, not the Nicholas Lame shitmake)
Your topical style actually reminds me a lot of @
ill nik-A, I don't know if you've read much by him but almost everything from the rhyme scheme jumping around to the 'scatterbrained' type writing where one thought jumps to another etc - It's real reminiscent, to me at least, and I've known of nik-A for a decade or more.
There's great wording in parts right through this, ala @
dead man at points with your turn of phrase. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for feeding my drop.
Keep that pen moving!