I love the rhyme scheme you have here. It's kind of a similar style with mine and imo it helps the flow run a hell of a lot smoother and makes each line roll straight off your tongue so props to that. Some of the multis were kinda blah to me like these lines:
Now it's the same ol' song all the cocaine's gone but at least my flow game strong...
I'm hittin' propane bongs, shit, I was breakin bad way before the show came on!...
Idk that just felt kinda typical rap shit to me you know what I mean? But literally besides those lines there was really nothing bad I could say about this except maybe expand your vocabulary. Good piece man.
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