Now he roams the restless ‘Handle, he won’t rest til they’re dead
As he paints the West in red, in search of Texas revenge
^Tight.
It wasn't the most thorough effort, Mr. Schwartz but it was solid writing. You seem like you have the instincts to be able to make a longer piece and really hammer home a memorable story. This one felt like more of a snippet or a synopsis - all verses are, really, compared to short stories, but that's what makes it an artful process.
Keep doing you
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