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Old 07-29-2014, 09:52 PM   #5
Adverse
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Originally Posted by UnbornBuddha View Post
It started a little slow, but once you started going it turns to a nice tune. Also your flow & voice seems to change sporadically at times this changes the pacing a bit that I believe shifts the rhythm that your intending to convey. As for the singing of your choruses, this is a good thing to do, and I believe makes songs a more palatable. But if you are going to venture into this area I suggest you improve your vocals.
The beat is very enjoyable. It has this ethereal feel to it.
Anyways, keep making your music and spreading it. Follow your dreams.
The flows always been a little up and down, one of the things I truly need to iron out. Thank you for all the positive words and I really appreciate the listen, it means a lot bro, honestly!
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