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PancakeBrah · 03-25-2013, 11:21 PM

Objective-

What a strong opening line. I read it 3 times, science fact. Then your verse sucked for a little bit, and the ending was cool. I thought, after reading the first bar, I was in for a treat. But it was just a rice cake.

Ink-

Better rhymes than Objectivo. But you really straddled (LOL STRADDLE) the line between cool reading and corny as fuck.

Pretty darn close, fellas.

v/ Objective

03-25-2013, 11:21 PM	#15
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	Objective- What a strong opening line. I read it 3 times, science fact. Then your verse sucked for a little bit, and the ending was cool. I thought, after reading the first bar, I was in for a treat. But it was just a rice cake. Ink- Better rhymes than Objectivo. But you really straddled (LOL STRADDLE) the line between cool reading and corny as fuck. Pretty darn close, fellas. v/ Objective __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder