[cyph her]

I don't know what my point was. But I was drunk..

Anyway...

Patrown -

"the past is a go between for victory and failure,
time presides over both and lives inside our earth"

Excellent way to open up and set the tone for the verse, which kind of just continued with the same standard throughout. It was clear, developed and clean. Dope verse.

Soulstice - I didn't fully understand the first few several lines.. But the story for me really started here:

So eerie by the backdrop of the fifth period bell

Other kids played video games - while he would sit, sickly and strange
Indifferent to play while his soul was drifting away
That infinite gaze - just a phase, how would he know otherwise
Other kid's act just as strange he'd heard so from the other guys
This troubled guise - just an act for attention? It had to be
"This is only my son," he thought "Not like he's some walking catastrophe.."

Excellent story telling and damn that flowed well.

Two very different directions were taken in this battle.. And what an enjoyable read from both! Voting pulled me in two different directions here.. but I just couldn't help but get lost in Soul's verse.

V - Soul