cyph her - Conversational tones were felt; an interesting verse. Gentle currents of language were preferred over anything dense. Things read smooth for the most part. One small crit/observation might be a versatility of feelings and sensations. More instances or examples exploring the main theme.
Zenland - Stellar performance of you with little flashiness. You chose to go for personal, character-driven strokes, touching on an overused subject but giving it a homemade glow. It was self explanatory and invoked a decent atmosphere of lovesickness.
My vote goes to cyph her.
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