I absolutely love when I can read a verse and visualize each word. Adon you captured that here. It didn't at all seem forced.. everything transitioned well. It was as if I were watching you paint it. Very impressive. Vulgar.. I did need to read this a number of times, but in doing so, I was able to identify some pretty key takeaways from it whereas initially I would have not. I see the main difference between the verses is impact and imagery. You delivered impact and much of it given the words chosen was very powerful.. But I feel like I'm detecting a bit of forcefulness.. Like you were not positive it would work, but rolled the dice.. I could be wrong. Must give it to Adonis.
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