Thought this was pretty good. The concept wasn't special to me. The wording seemed a bit obvious. But you started off right there. The verse is bare, just an open wound. Left its message and that's it. I liked it. Encapsulated in a capsule.
Pro-choice is the correct answer but I can accept a well written piece. This wasn't "well-written" by the normal standards here but you don't really drop so it was a refreshing different style. Cool read.
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