This was really great.
Frank your style in this was a little bland and less descriptuve than usual and at times the repetitive scheme got boring to me. Id like to see a littlemmore imagery from you and also Ted and Jeffery don't stay at the same prison silly.
King ra lolz you overconfident bastard boy. I liked your approuch to the topic and thought you really did a good job at making this piece your own. Although the flow was crispt throughout I think I enjoyed the last little bit the most. Crisp and clean. Bravo
king ra +1
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