This had a very calming feel to it. I loved your choices in wording and language, as the abstract subtlety built very poetic and interesting imagery. Fully rhyming this piece would have been the icing on the cake, but i think i see what you were doing here. This is technically my first time reading you, seeing as how for some reason I never finished reading the other stuff you dropped in the league, but I think your style is very interesting, and over time can be a serious spectacle in OM. Keep it up :)
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