Wow. Its very cool to see the shit you're capable of- seeing as how you never... well, you know. I loved the consistency in your thought and execution. The flow was everso crisp and interesting and your story+rhyming kept me reeled in til the final reveal. Throughout the story I was under the impression the character was in hell... a sort of Dante's Inferno type setting, with tiers and shit. But I loved it for what it was, even though the character turned out to be gay? Great job, Wit.
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