innovator.
pros; good vigor
cons; poor rhyme scheme
did you rush it? be honest man..............
I seen you come a whole lot sicker man....
this kind of tripped over it self,,I wasn't enthralled forreal...
you said she immolate but you meant she emulate? No hate man....
I could tell you rushed it tbh I thought it wasn't up to par....
king keith.
pros; interesting story line
cons; mediocre closer
I got the pharaoh flow......
this shit was like reading a scroll man lmao...
some of your wordplay was tame when you were describing the lions...or the bees...
you said that the sting was powerful enough to put a human to sleep?????
my suggestion to you is magnify your wordplay a more
v/king keith
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