[PancakeBrah]

This was my favorite piece of yours. Although the alien/mind invader piece from The Winter Topical's close.

I liked the little vignette to give your theme some color. Acted like a springboard. Expertly written. The only two spots I didn't like were 'whole brow' and 'axis information'. Aside from that I thought this was great. Had a clear theme/idea and you wrote it well. Each word had weight and purpose and the ender was well placed.

Sorry for the lack of in-depth feedback. I've read this a couple of times. I just haven't felt the motivation to break down pieces lately. But this was a gem.