I like that woman in the picture. Is it a screenshot from a movie? That'd be cool if it was a photomanipulation.
A double-edged arrow to the heart of the seed
^This was my favorite line. Interesting idea.
You have a knack for wording your lines well, and also for imaginative concepts placed in concession with one another at a steady pace. You allowed room for your lines to breathe, rhyming them with finesse. I would've went a little heavier on the relationship aspect. There are tons of opportunities for using man and woman in a cybernetic/organic context.
Good work. @
Mael
Keep doing you