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Old 03-15-2013, 11:13 PM   #9
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Rayge had the blood type line and Missal n Hymn. The other lines weren't misses, those just stood out. A pretty consistent verse, the dropped fire line has been used.

Mac, the giving keys line could have been nice but you didn't deliver a heavy punch. The other lines weren't very good either. lords and cards does not rhyme.

immigrant bitch, stop seekin the american dream & prayin to the lords
i would play UNO with you.. but you'd just steal all the green cards

lords/cards nope.

You have good concepts Mac, it just seems statementish.

V/Rayge
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