Noticing the trend of relationship pieces. But your very good at attacking these
behind the steering wheel on a mescaline binge
telling me you're gonna die unless i tell you to live.
it reminds me of when we were kids. playing Nancy and Sid
inking up our bodies so the past can exist
grasping for grip. all i want is for a movement, a twitch
but i can't move you an inch. life's a beauty, passion's a bitch
one of my favorite parts right here. loved the playing nancy and sid line. kinda crazy figures to be modeled after at young age and reveals how long this relationship has been.
Thought the piece started off slow and unmoving. The whole haze of love and numbness of a troubled relationship where you want to leave but always find yourself caught back up in the attraction; it gets a bit overused. Too comfortable in your own niche. But you prove yourself with the visuals you depict.
relations simmer. making love in a financial position
stagnant, monochromatic. fuck, i've had it, we're finished
but i keep coming back for seconds after a guinness
you shine. you killed icarus. put plants into synthesis
but you gave into the standard constituents.
angel wings, ball and chain contingent. born as a slave
nobody's to blame. let it be neutral, balance the pressure
nobody but the other knows we're fastened together
some more lines i liked. I didnt really get the standard consituents part, but maybe thats just me thinking of the wrong way to use it. Very good read only thing i didnt like was the wrestled disorders part that just kind of threw off the flow and felt put in becuz you couldnt think of an alternative. But beyond that props
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