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Originally Posted by sacrifice
I'm personifying the metaphorical connection between my pain and my passion; either in vain attempts at convincing myself that I am "significant," or a description of the struggle through layered imagery; using freedom language and heroism in the final couplet to pay homage to the paradoxical nature of the verse, but with what can be interpreted as a way out in the end.
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That's real groovy, it's always nice when an artists shows a viewer what they are really going for in their piece. At first I didn't find much emotion basically just saw angst and rushed thought but after reading I find that it appears more layed out and could mean a lot more than represented or past interpreted; or rather, the emotional vibes that I was receiving wasn't which you wished to send, one could say.
I forgot to mention how much I enjoyed it, I always seem to do that; drop feedback and just leave it with a negative or positive judgment. Need to work on that shit....