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Originally Posted by Certain
Also, you twice used incorrect subject/verb agreements that threw me off ("beasts that feeds" and "hearts that bleeds").
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How should they have been? Beasts that feed/Hearts that bleed? Thanks for pointing it out btw. Great feed all around, appreciated! And ye, you'll definitely see me in the AOWL.
Thanks to everyone for reading and taking your time to feed.
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