uh oh was dope, reminds me of history or latin from HS. I like that type of shit and I think it played to your strengths. In a pure hairy balls roar competition you might be king, but in the topical sense you still hold it down. I don't like the all caps but your shit has swag to it. Good piece.
oats was dope, imagery on point like a motherfucker slumbering id woah. Good depiction of human evolution's waves and the self's idosyncracies. Great command of the author subjective, ending was profound and I was feelin it all the way through. Oats won it imo.
V/ oats
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