Witty this was dope brah, truly the mark of a champion's pen. I thought the extended descriptions of the man's suffering was a bit overdone, but other than that it was a well written, compelling story, although I have seen you write much better. As far as deadman, it carried profound sentiments, flowed wonderfully and rang true with reality's weight. Another great verse and I think he took it comfortably this time, but thanks for the read yo.
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