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Originally Posted by Pent uP
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Thanks dude, I appreciate you spending the time to read and type up your vote.
Shout out and props to @
Mr. J, very dope verse my dude, the battle could have gone either way, I wasn't completely happy with how my verse turned out if I'm honest, I think I did ok with the story I told and the technical side of things, but there was a meaning behind the story I don't think I managed to get across fully, I expect more from myself, so I would have had no complaints if you had ended up winning, your piece was very entertaining and artfully written, I enjoyed the read very much.
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dead man next?
Upping my game for this one.