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Vulgar · 01-05-2014, 06:52 PM

Plainer than usual from you, and I say that because it's blunt vs. a little wordplay mixed in like you do sometimes, which complements the storyline and keeps it from getting monotonous. Decent writing here, could be spruced up in certain parts.

01-05-2014, 06:52 PM	#2
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Plainer than usual from you, and I say that because it's blunt vs. a little wordplay mixed in like you do sometimes, which complements the storyline and keeps it from getting monotonous. Decent writing here, could be spruced up in certain parts.