ya doin a quick vote here
deadman - incredible wording as usual. jumped into the topic quite well. was more of an overview and lacked emotion though. technically superior using an advanced rhyme scheme.
pohfig- good storytelling. didn't really hit the topic as well as I wanted it to. and the whole story seemed like its been done before. very good wording. an excellent verse overall.
vote - deadman
very close battle. hard to decide but I got black d here. two enjoyable reads.
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