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Originally Posted by Genocide
Lars is a fucking retard.
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I sort of agree with him. Just because it doesnt flow as well (to him) doesn't mean he can't make that a point of argument. The stanzas were a bit long (not that I had a problem with that, I do that as well). Everybody's going to have a qualm about something, somewhere. I actually like several pieces but only give it a not so positive review to further sate my technical needs towards a verse. Sometimes it's a head nod to the writer. In this case, idk what Lars thought. But if he thought it was bad, so be it. On the other hand, if you think he's retarded, that's fine too, just show your work on the draft paper for extra credit.
No, but seriously. I sort of agree with Lars here. The message was pretty stellar, but it was too elongated and bland in some views. The writer has a grasp on writing though, clearly. That isn't at dispute at all here. Good job, everybody. (I didn't read it all, either)