@ Objective .. your verse was just disturbing .. the flow is fucking stretched & worded way to much .. it had me losing focus on what you where even trying to display .. like your rhyme schemes are fucking disgustingly bad rainbows of blood & flower buds i just an examply .. please dont take this as me hating because i dont know you but this was horrible in my opinion ... 3.5/10
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@ Innovator
But he deceives everyone including the children he watches
Shows them the sport while he makes sport from his options
^decent attempt w/ wordplay
But it turns out I was wrong in askin, see I wasn’t looking write
Cuz the truth is, while I protected my son he was fucking my wife
Nigga In a spandex suit with a fanny pack licking her poop shoot
While im looking after my sons asshole this assholes sucking her asshole with a scoop?
^funny ending ..
This was a little bit of a better read then Obj, but at the same time maybe it was just the topic, because neither showed any real writting talent incorporating a story w/ it & what not ...
Vote- Inny
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