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Old 12-07-2013, 01:55 PM   #12
Vulgar
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lol this was cool. Your ending was unique compared to what I'm used to from you. It was making a mockery, but it was also oddly open-minded in tone.

So guess it's time to gloat
OM guys have designed their hope
Stick together
Hoping to live forever
All of a sudden these kids are better
"Oh yea, that shit is clever!"
^Since there are clever writers doing it, I found that this wasn't completely opposed to ALL the writers. It was meant for your intended frienemies, but it came out ambiguously. I liked that.

Another original spin from you, nik.

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