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Old 12-01-2013, 05:58 PM   #1
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Damn man still killing it.

"Some honeycombs are made of hexagrams - onlookers admire its odd beauty
There's a difference between staying alert and being an ant in a food cabinet on guard duty"

Well worded for the complexity of the concept, that can be tough to do this effectively.

Autumn leaves/Buddhist cow bar was dope too.

The whole thing had all the components of a successful Vulgar verse. Depth, vocab, imagery, top notch. Consistently enjoyable throughout, commendable for a verse this size.
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