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I tried it out in the AOWL back in October, bit of a different layout to the text but the same scheme/style with the:
A...B
A...B
B...C
B...C
I don't think everyone caught how technical it was what I was doing, there's a lot of poly-syllabic rhymers in there, so I tried this broken-down-bar style to maybe emphasise what I was doing?
but that's how the game goes sometimes, you need a league where the experienced writers outweighs the newer guys for them to fully appreciate what you're doing with it
just tryna step my own game up, I can carry a scheme for days but my old text verses simply couldn't be spat to a beat
now I've been recording, I've shortened my bars up a whole lot so that they can while still maintaining that technical difficulty